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autumn cameo

Written Language Sample

Cameo

Learning Intention: I am learning how to use appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs in my cameo writing.

Success Criteria: I am able to find and highlight adjectives and verbs in a cameo and explain why they work.

I am able to write sentences with appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs in my cameo.

Task:  To write a poem about autumn, using appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs.

Remember to:  Punctuate your work correctly.

        Use careful spelling and sounding out

WINTER

Winter blows its cold  icy breath everywhere.

The early morning frost is crunchy and white covering then green  grass.

The loud wind howls in the freezing air like a stray dog hungry for a bone.
Tiny snowflakes flutter down to land on the frozen ground,

covering everything with a white sparkling blanket.

The trees become bare, brown bones standing like statues admiring the view.

Heavy rain falls from the dark grey sky, pounding against the soggy ground.

Chilly bitterness in the air, winter is here.

Here is my writing!

Autumn - DRAFT

The cold breeze flows around me as I walk down the pathway. The heavy rain charges down at me like bullets from a plane. . Suddenly I heard a crash of thunder. Then it started to hail. It felt like hundreds of stones crashing on me. Suddenly a big tree zoomed down on the ground. Crash I darted to my bedroom. I opened my curtain. I saw hundreds of leaves blowing up and down over and over again. Then they flew away as fast as they could run. Then I saw dad with a big chainsaw cutting down the tree. It took all day long. BOOM!!!! CRASH!!! Long away. I saw a big fire. I saw lots of smoke the dark grey sky pounding against the soggy ground.

AUTUMN - Publish

The cold breeze flows around me as I walk down the pathway. The heavy rain charges down at me like bullets from a plane. Suddenly I hear a crash of thunder. It started to hail. It felt like hundreds of stones crashing on me. Suddenly a big tree fell down on the ground. Crash! I darted to my bedroom. I opened my curtain. I saw hundreds of leaves blowing up and down, over and over again. The leaves flew away as fast as they could run. I saw dad with a big chainsaw cutting down the tree. It took all day long. BOOM!!!! CRASH!!! Far away I could see a big fire. I saw lots of smoke. The dark grey sky pounded rain onto the soggy ground.