Kia Ora Alex My name is Adison and I am a year 6 at grey main school I have read your metaphor I thought it was great but next time you could work on what the purpose of this activity was and why you did this. this reminds me of when I made some metaphor about myself if you want to check this out go to my blog http://gmsadisonk8934.blogspot.co.nz/ Why did you chose a lion?
Hi Alex, I'mm Jake from Grey Main School. I like your metaphors about a lion. You have some cool describing ideas.I especially like the picture you have put on. Maybe next time you could make the text bigger and easier to read. This reminds me of the metaphor poems we have been writing too.
Hi my name Gage from Greymouth and I go to Greymain school.i liked your metaphor poem. My class have been doing metaphor poems also. I hope mine is as good as yours. bye for now from Gage
Kia Ora Alex My name is Adison and I am a year 6 at grey main school
ReplyDeleteI have read your metaphor I thought it was great but next time you could work on what the purpose of this activity was and why you did this.
this reminds me of when I made some metaphor about myself if you want to check this out go to my blog http://gmsadisonk8934.blogspot.co.nz/
Why did you chose a lion?
Bye for now keep up the good work
Adison
Hi Alex, I'mm Jake from Grey Main School. I like your metaphors about a lion. You have some cool describing ideas.I especially like the picture you have put on. Maybe next time you could make the text bigger and easier to read. This reminds me of the metaphor poems we have been writing too.
ReplyDeleteHi my name Gage from Greymouth and I go to Greymain school.i liked your metaphor poem. My class have been doing metaphor poems also. I
ReplyDeletehope mine is as good as yours. bye for now from Gage